Sunday, January 15, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday (1/15) ~ Heart Ache

Good Morning, Sixers! 

Today's Six comes from HEART ACHE, due out January 24th.

As with last week, Gabrielle is still sick. Blech! Poor girl.
Nikolai has served her the soup he brought and is now preparing to leave. 


“I can see myself out. Rest well, Gabrielle.”
Walking out of her apartment was torture, plain and simple. He paused in the hall and stared at her closed door. Running his hand over the cool metal he wished he could go back inside. Instead he walked away, anticipating the dead feeling that accompanied their separation.

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  1. This is very intriguing. I really want to read more to understand why he feels this way. Definitely feel his sadness.

  2. Talk about stopping his heart... Poignant six, Morgan. :)

  3. You do a great job of showing his unhappiness. I especially like him staring at the closed door. Good writing.